Showing posts with label THE Teaser. Show all posts
Showing posts with label THE Teaser. Show all posts

Thursday, October 14, 2010

THE Chapter 30 Teaser

I turned my back and walked up the driveway to the front door, listening as his car pulled away from the curb with a loud screech and flew down the street. I froze in place, caught my breath to fight that lingering unease in my chest and entered the house.

Phil was home but Renee wasn’t. I considered by passing him up to my room without a word but he caught me just as my foot found the first step.

“Hi Bella.” I turned to the sound of his voice and didn’t even bother to hide my emotions.

“Hey,” I replied dryly. I didn’t make a move from the steps. I needed to be alone as soon as possible.

“How was your night?” he asked casually, leaning against the wall with his arms crossed.

I paused as visions of the night before flashed through my mind. I fought back the tears that were threatening to spill at the turn of events and replied with a mumbled and unenthusiastic “Fine.”

“I’m heading out in just a bit anyways... have a few errands to run.” He stated to my disinterest. I nodded mutely before turning back toward the stairs and hurrying up to my room.

Once inside, I shut the door and threw myself onto my bed, collapsing like an old rag doll as I nuzzled my face into the pillow where I lay on my stomach. I wanted nothing more than to escape the world and its negatives for a few hours.

I switched my phone off, not in the mood for being disturbed, grabbed my iPod and stuffed the ear phones into my ears. I switched it onto shuffle, turned up the music and curled into my bed, surrendering myself completely to the natural pull of sleep.



L4J Note: I'm currently beta'ing this chapter and I can't wait to read it. Oh shit, wtf is going on with Bella? Let's keep it real she never goes radio silent. I'm hoping Edward didn't fuck something up?! Damn it these two I tell ya. Until next time, you know I love you guys. Be good out there okay be as good as you can be lol. Peace.


Here's the link:  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5460646/1/Through_His_Eyes


Here's the summary: Carlisle's moved to Forks in hopes of taming Edward's ways. But it seems it will take more than a new town to help Edward deal with the horrors of his past. Edward is weary of getting close to people but will Bella change that for Edward? AH

Wednesday, June 30, 2010

THE Teaser Chapter 28


“By the way,” Charlie said from the top of the porch steps once we’d reached Edward’s car. Edward and I both turned around at the sound of his voice, my insides churning with the unsettling tone of Charlie’s voice.

“Some gum might be a smart idea next time. The smell of an ash tray isn’t particularly pleasant.”

My mouth fell agape, disbelieving of Charlie’s rudeness. I chanced a glance at Edward, whose jaw seemed clenched so tight I thought I’d hear his teeth shatter.

Without a word, he thrust his driver’s side door open with a little more force than necessary and threw himself into the car, his agitation and anger rolling off of him in waves.

I turned my gaze to Charlie and shook my head at him as I frowned. I knew the divorce never left Charlie the same, turning him into a pessimist and an atheist to love and relationships but I hadn’t expected him to throw that onto me and my life. It hurt.

The sound of Edward’s car roaring to life, yanked me out of my thoughts. I opened my car door and slipped myself into the cold leather seat and slammed the door shut after me.

Edward pulled away from the curb and I could tell it was taking everything in him, not to thrust his foot against the gas pedal and fly down the street.

I fixed my eyes to the scenery outside my window, the tension in the car palpable and unsettling. I very well knew Edward had been treated unfairly. Charlie seemed to see the bad in people these days before any good and that was something I could never forgive my mother for. I felt that recognizable pang in my chest in remembrance of my parent’s nasty divorce and shook my head, wishing it was as easy as shaking the thoughts and bleak memories away.

I was afraid to break the silence. I could see Edward’s hands gripping the steering wheel tightly, his knuckles a snow white from the pressure. His whole body was rigid and I wasn’t sure what to say or if I should even say anything at all. What on earth do I say? Do I apologize for my father’s rude behavior or do I try and justify what he’d said? It didn’t change my feelings toward Edward, I still loved him, God did I love him and nothing anybody could say would ever change that.

We reached his aunt’s house in deafening silence. I could see his Uncle Caius’ motorbike in the driveway, exactly where it had been parked the day before. As I was staring at it, Edward climbed out of the car and rounded it to my side, opening my door and waiting for me to step out.

I slipped out, glimpsing the look on his face as I did. He looked irritated more than angry and I was hoping he’d speak to me before we went inside but to my disappointment, he slammed my door shut and turned for the front door.

Saturday, June 19, 2010

THE Teaser Chapter 27

“Who’s that motorbike belong too?” I asked pointing to the black Ducati that sat in the driveway.

“My Uncle’s. Which reminds me, he promised me a ride on that fucking thing. Its nice isn’t it?” Edward said walking up to it to get a closer look.


“Very,” I said as my eyes scanned over its curves. 
“You like bikes?” Edward asked. 


“Ah, I guess. I’ve never really thought about it.” He chuckled, before throwing his leg over the leather seat and settled himself on the bike, leaning forward to grip the handle bars.


“Do I look hot?” He asked with a cocky smirk.


I grinned, “You always look hot.”


“That’s my girl.” He grinned back. I couldn’t help but admire the way he looked on the bike, it really did suit him, especially since he was in his leather jacket.


“Get off my girl.” My head as well as Edward’s snapped up to the front door where Caius was walking out of. 


“Your girl?” Edward asked with an amused arched eyebrow. “Have you given her a name too?” He teased.


Caius reached us, his hands casually in the pockets of his pants and stood in front of the bike.


“Yeah… Daisy.” He said with a leering smile. 


Edward groaned, “Fuck off.” he said removing himself from the bike. Caius chuckled and I couldn’t help but feel like I’d missed something in the exchange. 


Caius must have noticed my confused expression because he explained, “Edward’s guitar.” I furrowed my brows in perplexity, my eyes darting to Edward for further explanation but he just ran an agitated hand through his hair before pulling out a pack of cigarettes and offering one to Caius, who took it without hesitation. 


“Edward hasn’t told you that his guitar has a name?” Caius mumbled around the cigarette between his lips before he cupped his hands over the end of it and lit it.


“Err… no.” I said, my eyes flickering back and forth between Edward and Caius. “Daisy?” I asked Edward, trying to keep a straight face.


“Yeah, Daisy. Every musician names his instrument…” he froze for a second then said, “Musical fucking instrument, not instrument as in his dick, although some guys do name their dicks too.” He smirked. I felt my face turn crimson at the turn the conversation had taken. I didn’t feel comfortable talking about dicks, particularly in front of his uncle.


Caius seemed unaffected, “So next time, before you tease me, just remember you’re not any better.”


“So you like riding your girl?” Edward snickered. My eyes went wide in shock before I elbowed Edward in the side.


“That’s ok, Bella,” Caius said, smiling with amusement at Edward, “I’m used to his antics. It just wouldn’t be Edward without them.”


“That’s true,” I mumbled. 


“Well, kids, I better head back inside and you two should get a move on.” He said, taking a draw from his cigarette.


“Yeah, alright. I’ll see you in a bit.” Edward nodded at his uncle. I murmured a goodbye with a little wave as he turned for the house and headed inside.

L4J Note: I'm beta'ing chapter 27 right now and my best friend wants me to go to her house today. If I take my notebook I won't get anything done. I can't even read a book over there so  why try and beta over there? I should have did it yesterday but I didn't finish and that's my fault. Why can't anyone understand that this is important to me as well? 


Anyway, I going to finish beta'ing this chapter today so Diana can post. This is me holding up her chapter of excellent work. I love her like a sister but I fail her sometimes but that's life. I can only try harder in the future, huh? Until next time I getting my shit together and finishing this chapter!


I forgot I don't think I'm adding anymore Eclipse trailers/clips just because we are getting close to the final countdown. I can't wait a day after my hubby's birthday I going to see Eclipse hell yeah! 


Oh check out the Through His Eyes trailers below they are so good especially chapter 25. That was the hardest chapter for Diana to write to date. She drove me crazy and she should have because that chapter was so important! I think we got it right is Diana awesome? I think so! 


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Tuesday, May 25, 2010

THE Teaser Chapter 26

I woke up a few hours later, my bed side clock informing me it was just past three in the morning. Patting the cold bed beside me, I realized Bella wasn’t there. Furrowing my brows and muttering a ‘fuck’, I sat myself up and rubbed the sleep from my eyes. Where the fuck did she go?

Scrambling out of bed and pulling on my boxer shorts, I padded out of the room and out into the hall. I squinted against the dim light illuminating the hallway in a soft yellow glow. Low murmurs coming from Emmett’s room caught my attention, leading me in that direction. His bedroom door was open and I tried not to glare at him when I found him sitting up in his bed, his back against the headboard, wearing nothing but some boxers and a wife beater. Bella was sitting Indian style by his legs, picking at her nails, her expression forlorn and serious. She had changed into a pair of flannel pants and a tank top. At the sound of me clearing my throat, her head snapped up in my direction, her eyes wide with surprise.

“Edward.” She said forcing a smile to her face. My eyes darted over to Emmett who just smiled at me like nothing was going on, but the look of guilt on Bella’s face had me suspicious.

“You weren’t in bed.” I said a little shortly to Bella, not meaning to sound so curt.

“I woke up and couldn’t get back to sleep.” She shrugged. “I was heading down to grab a glass of water but Emmett had just gotten home and he invited me in here and we kinda just lost track of time.”

“Geez, cool it bro. I won’t bite her.” Emmett said waving me in. “Join us.”

“I want to go back to bed. I’m tired as fuck.” I said scrubbing a tired hand over my face. “You coming?” I asked cocking an eyebrow at Bella. She hesitated for a second before nodding and shifting off the bed.

“Thanks Emmett.” She said smiling at him in thank you.

“Anytime BFF, I’m here.” He said seriously. “We’ll finish this tomorrow.”

“Sure.” Bella said coming to stand beside me. I slipped my hand into hers and tugged her against me, desperate for her warmth.

“Finish what tomorrow?” I asked looking between the two of them.

“None of your bees wax.” Emmett answered quickly. “Go sleep. I’m beat.” He said grabbing the top of the back of his wife beater and pulling it over his head and tossing it across the room. I didn’t like the idea of him flaunting his beef in front of my girl but the she didn’t seem to be affected by it.

“Night, Emmett.” She called over her shoulder as I shut the door behind us. I escorted us back to my room trying to beat down the nagging feeling I had that whatever they were talking about had to do with me.

Tuesday, May 4, 2010

THE Teaser Chapter 25

Edward held his hand out for me to take to help me into the tub. I stepped into the warmth of the water, and sank myself down into Edward so that my back was to his chest. I light moan escaped me as the warmth of both his body and the water enveloped me. His hands came around my waist, pulling me closer to him, his legs bent, knees up on either side of me. I laid my head back against his shoulder, reveling in the comfort of being in his arms despite the circumstances. This was the perfect way to reconnect after being apart. 

We sat in silence, neither one of us talking. I knew he wasn’t up for it so I didn’t push him. I was hoping this would be soothing enough, helping to ease him somewhat after the stressful 72 hours he had endured.


I felt his lips press onto my neck in a delicate kiss, sending a shiver to erupt through me. It was loving and so gentle that my heart was fighting to beat out of my chest for him. That’s how we spent the next hour in the tub - lightly caressing each other in an innocent manner. There was nothing sexual about it. But even with that said, his kisses still felt resistant, held back and I was struggling to figure out why. He claimed he ‘needed’ me so would it be irrational to fear he would leave me? Honestly, at this point, I wasn’t sure what to expect from him anymore.


Ultimately, conversation began. He was the first to speak and I hadn’t realized how concerned I had been with the silence till he uttered that first sentence and relief washed over me. Our talk was brief, skimming over trivial topics, nothing of essence and I went along, keeping him in his comfort. There was plenty to discuss but now was not the time.


Thursday, April 22, 2010

THE Teaser Chapter 24

From its-rpattz-baby via twitter today:


I was lighting a cigarette after just finishing my meal when I heard Emmett mutter a ‘holy fuck’ from beside me. Furrowing my brows, I followed the direction of his gaze, my eyes widening slightly when I spotted her. I felt my heart rate accelerate dramatically; suddenly beating so furiously in my chest I could hear it in my ears. Everything around me faded into a blur of grey as the only thing that remained clearly visible to me was the long dark hair and small frame a few feet away in front of me.

I could barely make out the voices around me as my name was repeatedly being called and I think I was even being shaken, trying to be snapped out of my stupor. That’s when it happened… on the second twirl her eyes passed over me before she stumbled again and her eyes snapped back to mine instantly, her face reflecting the same shock I was feeling by seeing her as well.

Charlotte